I worked with myself because this has been something I have wanted to make known for a while with out getting bashed on by my parents, I believe in something so I want to write about it. No harm done. The mode I used is argumentation and the genre would be informational because you can't have one without the other. I wrote this paper a couple weeks ago and even got some input from people in Vermont and how they feel about the issue at hand and the response I got was amazing I could not not write about it. I wrote this paper at school, home, coffee house and even in Vermont, the crisp healthy smelling air got to my head and made me want to write. I chose to write about this certain topic because I feel some wort of way when It comes to things like this and how silly law and order can be sometimes. We obey the law but do we even know why? Like I said previously my writing always has "what ifs" as a matter of fact thats pretty much the entire thing because I can't tell you what is going to happen but we can more than likely foreshadow what to know because of the stuff we do know to begin with. I will revise with constructive criticism by my peers, family, friends and my professor and listen to the possibilities at hand and how to squeeze in a certain things or what not. To even remove and replace.
The rhetorical mode I used was a narrative and the genre was to entertain and suspense the reader. Having him or her thinking about who this man is by the time the story is over. I wrote this paper consecutively for days, but when I first wrote it, it was all there out on paper. I just had no idea how to end it so I used some help from family member on what I should end this piece on and my aunt gave me some insightful things to put in there to make the story be a solid piece of writing. I wrote this paper in my basement, at school, at my aunts and in class.Yes I do feel that it was a god approach because different settings can set off different inspirations and aspirations to open your mind and think about different thing. I chose to write about this because I felt like had a l had a good lead on something that could turn into a suspenseful shirt story. Theres’s nothing but “if only” moments for me, this is a made up character and a made up life so really anything is possible. Look back, read it aloud, to family members and even friends to see if they have any constructive criticism to give me. |
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